tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29050188.post7099562119658185596..comments2023-10-09T19:55:10.885+08:00Comments on deeply shallow: #Fridayflash: TimeAnna Tanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16881266814597255847noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29050188.post-697710237906562562011-08-04T22:55:07.472+08:002011-08-04T22:55:07.472+08:00Hi guys! Thanks for dropping by and commenting! Gl...Hi guys! Thanks for dropping by and commenting! Glad you liked the piece =)Anna Tanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16881266814597255847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29050188.post-80744044641190671242011-08-01T01:41:41.549+08:002011-08-01T01:41:41.549+08:00Merely immortal. I like that line.
I liked this fl...Merely immortal. I like that line.<br />I liked this flash. The emphasis on the passing of time was excellent. And the doctors confusing was abit humerous. If they only knew, lol.W.G. Cambronhttp://www.cambronwriter.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29050188.post-78277898033964089222011-08-01T01:36:23.876+08:002011-08-01T01:36:23.876+08:00I love how you capture his sense of passing time.I love how you capture his sense of passing time.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14170148559429001125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29050188.post-47654265734836585062011-07-31T21:59:21.825+08:002011-07-31T21:59:21.825+08:00I love this. The description of his time waiting w...I love this. The description of his time waiting was great - especially the part about him staring off into space that was blocked by the building. And the ending left my mind with so many things to think about. Great story!Chuck Allenhttp://www.chuckallen.us/noreply@blogger.com